Thursday, March 31, 2016

The visit

Chapter 1. Big news

‘Julia! Dinner’s ready!’ shouted Julia’s mother.
Julia rolled down of her bed, sleepily opened her eyes then as slowly as possible she walked to the kitchen.
‘Finally!’ ‘We have been waiting for you here for ten minutes already! This is the 7th time I’m calling you!’ said Julia’s mother. ‘Yeah Julia, we were waiting for you!’ whispered Emily, Julia’s annoying sister.
‘Oh shut up will you?’ snapped Julia.
‘Anyways..’ interrupted Julia’s mother. ‘... What were you doing up there?.. Playing, Drawing, Listening to music, Watching TV?’
‘No, No, No and NO! I was sleeping!’ replied Julia.
‘Oh well… Let’s move on now, shall we?’ asked Julia’s father.
‘We have some  important news..’ said Julia’s father.
‘What again?!’ asked Julia and Emily together getting bored.
‘You are gonna get married?’ snickered Julia rolling her eyes.
‘Nice one sis!’ chuckled Emily.
‘No that was last year.’ said Julia and Emily’s father adjusting his tie and clearing his throat….
The important news is that we.. well that we..we..stammered the girl’s father.
‘Well come on, we haven’t got all day.’ demanded Emily. ‘I think I’m gonna die of boredom if you don’t say what you have to say  now!
‘Yeah me too!’
‘O.K. here it goes… We have been invited by the queen to have tea with her!’
‘WHAT!?’ shouted both girls. ‘WE HAVE BEEN INVITED BY THE QUEEN FOR TEA?!’
‘Yep- that’s right girls, we have been invited by the queen to have tea with her. And here’s the best bit: We are going to meet her majesty tomorrow!


Chapter 2. Arriving.
All day long everybody was practicing how to greet the queen with respect, kindness and politeness. Then they all went through every single shop in the country to buy the prettiest, sparkliest dress. When they finished shopping it was 9:27pm and then they went to get a manicure at a magnificent manicure salon! (except for the father who probably didn’t want to get his nails done!).  Two and a half hours later Julia, Emily and their mother’s nails were as bright as the sun and as pretty as a gorgeous, pretty tulip. Then Julia’s dad looked at  his watch ‘it’s already 11:54pm and it is  getting late. We better go home.’  Then girls started yawning and then all the family decided to go home to be in great shape to meet the queen the following day.

The next day, everybody woke up at 7:00am sharp and started running around getting things packed!  
Then Julia and Emily started screaming to their mum and dad.
‘Mum! Should I bring my collection of shells to show the queen!?’ shouted Julia.
‘No she won’t care about your stupid, old shell collection!  But she’ll care about my beautiful, new vase collection that I have been collecting for 5 years already!’ shouted Emily back.
‘Stop fighting girls! Both of your collections are perfect and I’m sure the queen will love your collections!’ said the girl’s mother.
‘hmm!’ snickered  Emily.
‘I’m sure she’ll like my collection better than your ugly shell collection!’  said Emily passing Julia and pushing her in the shoulder.
‘What ever’ snapped Julia back to her sister.
‘Time to go girls!’ said Julia’s father.
‘YES! FINALLY!’ shouted both girls at the same time.
All the family jumped in the car and the 2 girls started singing a tune.
‘Were meeting the queen! Were meeting the queen!’
Suddenly Julia immediately stopped singing the tune and stopped moving for a few seconds.
‘What’s the matter dear?’ Asked Julia’s mother.
‘Wher..where is my tiara to show the queen?’ asked Julia.
‘I donna know. Don’t blame me.’ said Emily leaning away from the situation.
‘Oh it doesn’t matter sweety. You don’t need a tiara to empress the queen.’
‘Here we are: At the Buckingham Palace!’ said Julia’s dad.


Chapter 3. Meeting the queen

When they got out of the car the girls gasped in astonishment when they saw the castle.
It’s… It’s HUGE! gasped Emily
No, it’s Humongus! replied Julia
Huge. Humongus. Huge. Humongus. Huge.
Stop fighting girls said their mother.
As they entered the castle a gentleman came to greet them.
You ar? he said in a french accent.
We are here to meet the queen. replied the father.
Oh, monsieur has got thi letter ffrromm thi queen?
yes. said mother.
I vill show you thi way to thi queen.
Oh thanks… said Julia
Then lowering her voice she whispered:
I can’t understand a thing he said.
Me either. replied Emily….?
Uuuhhh….  What did he say???
He said he’s gonna show us the way to the queen . said the father.
OHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Thaaat! cried Emily out loud.
shhhhhhhuuussshhh said Julia. You’re gonna catch his attention!
Parrddonnn moi bout what did she sai?
Nothin’.
Oh. Thi queen douzz note like that we keepp seeecets from her.
of course of course! said thier mother in a assuring way.

When they arrived everybody bowed as the queen walked passed all the soldiers who were wearing shiny, sparkly suits.



Chapter 4. WOW!

WO...WOW! gasped the family mouth open.
She’s beautiful!
No she’s 1000,000000000 times better than beautiful.
The father was dribbling as the queen passed him.
Then the queen secretly winked at the father as if she wanted to attract him to her.
Then as soon as Julia saw that her dad was looking at the queen she immediately warned her sister Emily who was shocked to hear that. Then Emily passed the message to her mum who then instantly turned her face to her husband who was still dribbling and looking at the queen.
The girl’s mother who was mad kicked the father’s anckle hard.



Chapter 5. The Fight.

The husband suddenly  stopped  dribbling and cried:
OOOUUUIUCCHHHH! Well THAT caught the queen’s’ attention. ‘Oh darling, darling! Are you OK? As the queen approched him and helped him up she shot an icy glare at the mum. The two girls remarked that and they too approched thier dad and ''accidently'' made the queen fall. When the dad was finally up, they both glanced at the queen who wasw now dusting off the dust off her gown and said at the same time ' Ouppssis! Did we hurt you and then giggled. The queen she the another icy glare.

Chapter 6. Going home.
A few hours later it was time to go home. ' Well that was sure a long and boring day said the two girls and the mum together and they got into the car and slammed the door shut. And thats the end.

Chapter 7. Watch out!
Watch out for the next story! Bye!





































































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